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bigmacbear) wrote2012-12-08 11:58 am
bigmacbear) wrote2012-12-08 11:58 am
English lesson
Always remember to place punctuation carefully.
Right:
Caesar entered, on his head his helmet, on his feet armed sandals, on his brow there was a cloud, in his right hand his faithful sword, in his eye there was an angry glare. Saying nothing, he sat down.
Wrong:
Caesar entered on his head, his helmet on his feet, armed sandals on his brow, there was a cloud in his right hand, his faithful sword in his eye, there was an angry glare saying nothing. He sat down.
Right:
Caesar entered, on his head his helmet, on his feet armed sandals, on his brow there was a cloud, in his right hand his faithful sword, in his eye there was an angry glare. Saying nothing, he sat down.
Wrong:
Caesar entered on his head, his helmet on his feet, armed sandals on his brow, there was a cloud in his right hand, his faithful sword in his eye, there was an angry glare saying nothing. He sat down.